You know what my favorite fanfiction reviews are?

Ones that are posted minutes after you post a new chapter saying

dinutzzo:

mon-petit-pois:

no-im-not-going-without-you:

mcgeekle:

no-im-not-going-without-you:

Just put your head on his chest now ziva

Surveillance was not Tony’s favorite thing to do. Usually it consisted of long nights, cold food and snoring from one or more parties involved.  This time was different though. This time he had a smoking hot Ziva David on his arm for the night.  Though they were working undercover, it didn’t get much better than that.  

She sat with her back to him at the bar, martini in hand as they watched their suspect interact with a not-so-savory character a few booths away.  

“Way to be subtle, David.” 

“Subtlety is not exactly your specialty either, DiNozzo.” 

“I wasn’t the one that just sat down at the bar and started staring.” 

“Do you have a better suggestion?” she asked, taking a sip of her drink.

“Why yes, actually, I do,” he said, moving swiftly from behind her. “May I have this dance?” 

She looked at him skeptically for a moment before he waggled his eyebrows at her, making her smile.  She rolled her eyes before setting her drink down and placing her hand in his.  He led her to the dance floor, settling into a spot with a decent view of their suspect.  He grasped her waist, and for a second marveled at how small she really was.  

“You look beautiful tonight, you know.” 

“Thank you,” she replied, “You don’t look so bad yourself.

“I clean up okay, I guess,” he shrugged. 

“You have something on your mind.  What is it?” 

“Well, I just have one question,” he said, his eyes meeting hers.

“Yes?” 

“Just where are you keeping your gun?” he asked, giving her elevator eyes. 

She did the same, drawing her smoldering eyes up to meet his. “Why do you ask the question if you already know the answer?” 

“Maybe I’m just curious to see if I’m right, that’s all.  Or maybe it was to see if I could get a rise out of you.” 

“Oh I believe I would be the one getting a rise out of you tonight.” 

“Miss David are you trying to seduce me?” 

“Is it working?” 

“Always,” he said softly.

They looked deeply into each other’s eyes for a moment, before Ziva’s eyes darted quickly down to his lips.  Their hearts skipped a beat before she rose up on her toes to bring her lips to his.  Much to her dismay, he pulled away before she could reach him.  

He leaned down to whisper in her ear, “Not here.” 

She immediately looked crestfallen.  He didn’t need to see her face to feel her disappointment. 

“Don’t think for a second this is me saying no.” he said, nuzzling her ear slightly. “You have no idea how much I want that, Ziva.  We just can’t do it here, okay?” 

He pulled back to look her in the eye, “Your safety is more important than anything right now.  I gotta stay focused if I’m going to keep you safe.” 

Flashback

“Papa, dance with me one last time before you go,” Ziva said, her enthusiasm making her father smile softly. 

“For you, my daughter, anything.” 

Ziva smiled broadly as she took her father’s hand in hers.  She stood up tall, holding her frame elegantly as Eli began to sway. 

“So this is what they are teaching you in that fancy school I’m sending you to.” 

“Yes, papa.  I’m going to be a dancer someday.” 

“And you will be a beautiful one, Zivaleh.”  Ziva smiled up at him, her eyes bright and optimistic at the prospect of dancing forever.  Soon though, she looked down, the smile slipping from her features. 

“Do you have to go, Papa?” 

“I do.  It is for…” 

“The safety of Israel,” she said, disappointed. 

“You know it is my duty.” 

“I do. But who is going to keep you safe?”

“I will have a partner with me. And even if I did not, you know that it is my job, Zivaleh.   The world is dangerous, and there are many people who want to do harm to us.  I must protect you.  Your safety will always mean much more to me than my own.  Yours and Ari’s and Tali’s.” 

“I know.” she said, sadly, leaning forward and placing her head on his chest. 

“I can hear your heartbeat, Papa,” she whispered, a small smile blossoming on her face. 

“Always know, my Ziva, as long as my heart is beating, I will be keeping you safe.  I will always try my best to come home alive, so I can do it for a long, long time.”

“When you come home, I will have to listen again, just to be sure.”

“Of course,” he said, kissing her head. “Of course.” 

Ziva looked up into Tony’s eyes and nodded subtly.  She gently brought her body closer to his, laying her head on his chest.   He leaned down to gently kiss her head, taking a moment to breathe in the scent that was uniquely her, tightening his grip on her waist.  

She closed her eyes and surrendered herself to him for just a moment,   letting out a breath she didn’t know she was holding.    

She could hear his heartbeat. 

NOPE NOPE NOPE

What Niki said.

Nicole, why must you make me feel these feelings.

‘Lizzie Bennet makes a video titled ‘Closure’ three years after she finished her vlogging, she decides it’s time to tell her fans about how it all ended and how everything was going. If she still had fans, that is.’

Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Suspense - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Chapters: 9 - Words: 19,363 - Reviews: 206 

‘When an a-bomb is stolen from the Malibu Defence Office, the whole team are sent undercover - deeper than they ever have gone before. The situation brings forward complications between a certain pair of partners.’

Watch the youtube trailer for this fanfiction here.

English - Romance/Suspense - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Chapters: 7 - Words: 16,633

When an a-bomb is stolen from the Malibu Defence Office, the whole team are sent undercover - deeper than they ever have gone before. The situation brings forward complications between a certain pair of partners.

So guess what ive decided to write more of when I get a new laptop. #densi #fanfiction #NCISLA (Taken with Instagram)

OC dies leaving its kids to the care of otp.

 English - Romance/Suspense - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Chapters: 6 - Words: 13,948 

When an a-bomb is stolen from the Malibu Defence Office, the whole team are sent undercover - deeper than they ever have gone before. The situation brings forward complications between a certain pair of partners.

Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance/Suspense - M. Deeks & Kensi B. - Chapters: 4 - Words: 10,426 

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